tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11042734.post2376164457149249484..comments2023-07-29T07:16:26.381-07:00Comments on Painted Ocean: Not knowing a damned thing about the space programAlbatrosshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02156254141379602471noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11042734.post-5968300719778313802011-04-20T21:49:32.481-07:002011-04-20T21:49:32.481-07:00I'm not a teacher, so I will try to explain th...I'm not a teacher, so I will try to explain this as simply as possible.<br /><br />When a person says "every [set of things], including [particular thing]", that <b>particular thing</b> is understood to be a part of the <b>set</b>. (Or it should be, at least.) <b>Every shuttle mission</b> includes only shuttle missions, not Apollo missions, Gemini missions, Voyager missions, or any other space exercise. Shuttle missions include only shuttle missions, so it was wrong to refer to Apollo 13. (Especially in an article entirely about space shuttles.)<br /><br />Now if Ms. Sullivan had said/written the following, she would have been more on the mark:<br /><br /><i>Johnson Mission Control ran every shuttle mission, including STS-51-L, the ill-fated Challenger mission, when the infamous line, "<a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Michael_J._Smith_%28astronaut%29" rel="nofollow">Uh oh</a>" was spoken.</i><br /><br />But for some reason she wanted to get that <i>Apollo 13</i> reference in there. So she plunked it in, and in the most awkward place possible -- her sentence talking about <b>every shuttle mission</b>. If she meant it as a separate thought, she should have put it in another sentence.<br /><br />It's sloppy writing, and I'm not even a little bit of a moron for noticing it. I'm sorry you didn't.Albatrosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02156254141379602471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11042734.post-39905822795169726612011-04-20T21:01:59.904-07:002011-04-20T21:01:59.904-07:00Really? that's how you read that article? Only...Really? that's how you read that article? Only a total moron would think the writer thought Apollo 13 was a shuttle mission. They are two separate thoughts. Myself and several friends (we are all space nuts) read the article several times and not once did we get that meaning from it. Also the line "Houston We have a Problem" is the catch phrase every English speaking person is familiar with. Don't be a douche bag. That exact line was in the Apollo 13 movie.. which was based on a book written by James Lovell. Lovell was also hired by Ron Howard to be on set as an accuracy consultant. He had no problem with the use of "Houston we have a problem" AND HE WAS THE ONE WHO SAID IT! You need to move out of your parent's basement and get a life.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com